Every time I sit down to write I read and revise previous chapters. This makes it increasingly difficult to write a new chapter but, I hope, it makes the previous ones a little better.
I'm posting Chapter One as a preview for you and hopefully to get some feedback on things like my writing style, content and so on.
---- UPDATE: I revised Chapter one. See my other post.
I hope you enjoy the first chapter enough to leave me a comment and if not, I hope you hate it enough to leave me a comment. ;)